This doesn't meet assignment guidelines. You do a great job of adhering to the syllable counts for each line. However, the first line should concentrate ONE PORTION of the whole thing you've identified in your title, and the second line should compare that portion of the whole thing you've identified in your tile with something else. The comparison should be figurative rather than literal, and you should use a metaphor.
This doesn't meet assignment guidelines. You do a great job of adhering to the syllable counts for each line. However, the first line should concentrate ONE PORTION of the whole thing you've identified in your title, and the second line should compare that portion of the whole thing you've identified in your tile with something else. The comparison should be figurative rather than literal, and you should use a metaphor.
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